Mercenary81's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[-Soul-]

I wish you'd make more

I know the characters weren't original, but you wrote the script right?
I thought it was pretty funny, nice job =D

Jectoons responds:

=(
sorry to say that the script was part of a comic strip. Thanks for reviewing.

[mario murder]

A few things

1. Newgrounds really isn't the place to go for your first flash, you'll usually just be flamed and insulted for it. Please try to work on your skills a bit more before submitting another video.
2. Like i previously posted, you can't hide behind 'it was my first flash' . not many people will care.
3. Try to use more sprites, im not really a sprite animator myself but i have animated with them. Make it so that mario actually stands instead of jogging in place. Make sonic jump instead of run in the air. It really takes away from the whole movie if you just have them in a run loop the whole time.
4. Use correct punctuation and spelling when having your characters say something. It just makes it look much more professional.

There were a few other things, but those were the main points I wanted to get across. Other then that though, good job and I hope to see more from you .

zagfrog responds:

thx 4 the advice, i'm trying to work out those kinks right now

[My First Flash]

It says you were going to delete it 07

And its 3 months into 08 now. I thought it was pretty decent and you show promise as an animator. Good job.

Joey-HeroBlade responds:

thanks. Oh and this flash stays as it is!^^

[stick brawl(start)]

A few things

It's alright buttt...
1. If it loops the music screws up.
2. No preloader.
3. The sticks are a bit to small, and sometimes hard to see against the background.

Other then that though, the animation was pretty smooth and the deaths were decent. There wasn't any explosion for the bazooka though :\

[Flash Ads!]

It was a good idea and decent animation

But i could really tell when you were switching audio clips. Get a better mic is really all i can say. Good job besides though

blackcat2000 responds:

Heh... I know, and it annoys me too :P I might try and do a better job of the audio next time, and thanks for the review!

[:the Composer:]

That was incredible

You sir, are a great animator, writer, and so on. This has a great meaning behind it.

[Yeah Right!]

I thought some parts were really good

but the whole effort got dragged down by a few bad parts in my opinion.
Jockeys part was great :)

[Test Run, First Flash]

I always hate when i watch a move titled

"My first Flash"
But you suprised me. The lip synced well with the voice, the drawings were animated decently. Overall it was great for your first flash.

RyuJinLucy responds:

^^;; heehee, sorry for sounding like a n00b.

[The Narrator's Love Story]

Lmao

This was good! I wasnt sure at first but you did a good job

PostTimeskipSam responds:

Thanks!