Mercenary81's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Weird Al's Lasagna]

It's god awful

i love it

Jectoons responds:

Your review makes me sick.
But I love it as well.

[The Grayscale Spirit]

Oh well

I'm actually a bit ashamed of my part. Didn't come out very well at all, I wish i'd done more. Good collab overall, but i feel you could've cut some parts. At times it felt like it was dragging on.

MarcK responds:

Me too. I'm starting to hate this project...

[IF Round 4: vs Cyril P1]

I loved it.

The animation was superb and the audio was pretty nice. I supposing that if you continue it, there will be a flashback of some sort because so far the story lacks a lot. This really only took you 4 weeks?

Something about the voice acting really bugged me, just some of the voices actually. Im not sure why, the quality was nice, they just didn't sound right.

Zeurel responds:

Aye, voice actors are quite hard to come by on deviantart (where i normally float about). I'll be havign a good look at some others for later projects.

Cheers for the review!

[Hay Wars]

DIS Iz N0 FLASHZ

Isn't Ls Maker completely used for starwars scenes? I remember looking around the site once, but never actually downloading it.
I think you made a good choice not going with the lightsaber scene, its a bit too cliche now.

I'd like to see more movies like this end in a funny way.

Fro responds:

I never did the LS Maker, but my friend has. I might try it so I can submit my own movies so I don't have to bother him all the time. You can probably expect more movies from me like this. Thanks for the review.

[AnimaxAnniversaryCollab 1]

Mercenary81

Hi there. I like to make shorts. I just got a tablet. Hey! Another guy wrote my bio for me!

Jectoons responds:

Indeed.

[-Soul-]

I wish you'd make more

I know the characters weren't original, but you wrote the script right?
I thought it was pretty funny, nice job =D

Jectoons responds:

=(
sorry to say that the script was part of a comic strip. Thanks for reviewing.

[mario murder]

A few things

1. Newgrounds really isn't the place to go for your first flash, you'll usually just be flamed and insulted for it. Please try to work on your skills a bit more before submitting another video.
2. Like i previously posted, you can't hide behind 'it was my first flash' . not many people will care.
3. Try to use more sprites, im not really a sprite animator myself but i have animated with them. Make it so that mario actually stands instead of jogging in place. Make sonic jump instead of run in the air. It really takes away from the whole movie if you just have them in a run loop the whole time.
4. Use correct punctuation and spelling when having your characters say something. It just makes it look much more professional.

There were a few other things, but those were the main points I wanted to get across. Other then that though, good job and I hope to see more from you .

zagfrog responds:

thx 4 the advice, i'm trying to work out those kinks right now

[My First Flash]

It says you were going to delete it 07

And its 3 months into 08 now. I thought it was pretty decent and you show promise as an animator. Good job.

Joey-HeroBlade responds:

thanks. Oh and this flash stays as it is!^^

[Flash Ads!]

It was a good idea and decent animation

But i could really tell when you were switching audio clips. Get a better mic is really all i can say. Good job besides though

blackcat2000 responds:

Heh... I know, and it annoys me too :P I might try and do a better job of the audio next time, and thanks for the review!