Score: 3

"No. Bad Newgrounds user!"

submission: Death Note Intros

date: July 3, 2008

Don't say you deserve more then you got. Your being a jackass.
Movies that take months of work don't get more then a 3.5. I doubt this took more then a week, most likely not even 2 days. I don't care how much effort you put into it. Neither does 99.9 % of Newgrounds.

Im usually a pretty kind reviewer, I'm nice. I'll measure how much effort i think they put into it and make a fair vote. Im being harsh with you. Im giving you what your movie deserves. And only because you complain and bitch about what you got. No ones going to feel sympathy for a little bitch that throws a fit when they get a bad score. Just some advice. Don't do it.

Onto the actual review for the movie. The colors were. . . alright.They weren't awful but they were a sore to look at when they first came up.
I've seen the Death Note intros and the second song hurts my ears.
So far the audio hurts my ears and the visuals hurt my eyes. Not going so well really.
The whole movie, well i cant really call it that. It's not exactly enough to be a movie. Just two "deathnotes" zooming out. Try to put more actual material into your movies. Shorts like this aren't exactly fun to watch unless they have phenomenal animation or a great story. This doesn't have either.
So on a whole, put more material into your animations, don't submit shorts if they don't have a point and try to fix up your actual drawings.

Now if you reply to this perfectly fine review, that is only pointing out what you could do to improve as i have seen you do in previous reviews and say something along the lines of "THIS IS GREAT FUC U I DESERVE A 3" you'll only prove my point. You won't get very far if you act this way. Improve your form. No ones gonna like you this way, find a better way to vent your anger.

Score: 9

"Oh yes."

submission: ··Lip Sync Tutorial+++

date: June 30, 2008

The only thing that would make this better would be a description on how to manipulate the mouths, but i suppose that comes with experience. Nice job Ject.

Score: 7

"Mercenary81"

submission: AnimaxAnniversaryCollab 1

date: June 26, 2008

Hi there. I like to make shorts. I just got a tablet. Hey! Another guy wrote my bio for me!

Score: 8

"Great."

submission: Crows' Life Episode 3

date: June 25, 2008

Great job, the idea's really good. I would've never thought of crows trying to defeat a scarecrow. I haven't seen the first two but i'm checking them out for sure now. I was doubtful of the dubbing at first, but it came through pretty decently, it wasn't exactly phenomenal though. The music fit perfectly with the movie and the animation was terrific. I like your style.
Can't wait for the next one.

Score: 4

"I don't really like loops."

submission: Gigaplant Carameldansen

date: June 20, 2008

But i'll review it for what it is.
The drawing was..alright. Not really great, I couldn't tell what it was at first, it took me a second. I watched for about a minute, and that was only because the song was a bit catchy.
Newgrounds doesn't really need any loops, work on some kind of project instead of any more loops. With what i see here, you can probably make something pretty decent. Good luck on future projects.

Score: 7

"Pretty nice, its addicting."

submission: Icy Evade

date: June 20, 2008

The graphics were simple yet, they held a charm to them. Nice to look at .
The audio seemed like it was going to get annoying at first, but it was pretty fun to listen to, never really got on my nerves.
Has this gameplay style been done before? It felt familiar but i couldn't put it down. Anyway, nice job. I'll wait to see more from you.

Score: 7

"It was great. To an extent"

submission: Charizard & Blastoise

date: June 19, 2008

I loved the facial expressions, and the whole style of the animation. The graphics were a little crude, you might want to refine them a bit in later episodes, but the overall effect was marvelous. A lot of memories were brought up from the music too :)

But, unfortunately, heres the basic outline of what happened to me while watching this.

(The movie opens)

Oh. This looks nice.

(The movie finishes)

Well. That was a nice opener, this movies probably going to be good.
Replay?

...Wtf?

Unfortunately it was so short that it took away from the nice effect that it would've had, if it was longer. As previously stated, keep them short, but add them all in collectively and it will go over marvelously. Can't wait to see more out of you.

Score: 3

"The positive seemed to be previously pointed out"

submission: Madness Sniper Short

date: June 18, 2008

So i'll point out the negative. It's too glitchy, i watched it three times just to make sure it wasn't my computer. If you want a realistic look, put in more frames. A lot more frames.
The visuals, are sprites correct? Well, since you didn't make them yourself i won't give you points for them.
The audio was nice, but seeing as it was so short I heard barely anything.
Try working with your own stuff. Madness is overdone, and honestly I barely enjoyed the originals. Im completely sick of it now. Sprites aren't generally respected by a lot of Newgrounds so try and draw some stuff, anything really. You'll be glad once you do it.

Score: 6

"Well, it was alright"

submission: Mario Block

date: June 18, 2008

This had the basics. It was an interesting concept, i've never played something like it before. But a game is supposed to be fun. It felt more like work then play while i went through this game.

The visuals were nothing great, just sprites. I think it would've been nicer if you'd drawn your own blocks instead. Altogether it felt a bit unprofessional.

The audio was alright, the music didn't get too repetitive (in my opinion) but that 'woo' noice everytime i made a wrong choice was just awful.
Im giving it a six out of ten because it has potential, but lacks fun.

Score: 10

"An awesome game"

submission: Corpus.

date: May 18, 2008

This takes awesomeness to an extreme.
No, this game changed the way i view awesomness. I now think of awesomeness as an art, no longer an adjective. Yes, now because of you there is the art of awesomeness, and this is the highest standing in the form of awesomeness.